I'm too busy with WOC to write much of anything this morning, plus I have to write Ted's awesome guest post, which is mostly done but still will take some time, so I'm just going to post some links so you can see what I've been doing on WOC:
Here I critiqued Katie AKA CQG's 5 pages from FOSSEGRIM.
Here I critiqued Weronika Janczuk's query for WHERE THE DOVES FLY.
Here I critiqued Emily White's query for ELEMENTAL.
Here I critiqued Stine Lindenblatt's query for LOST IN A HEARTBEAT.
Here I shared my own query for WARRIOR-MONKS (I've even updated it a little since yesterday).
That's it for now. I intend to put my first five pages up too. I'll update this post once I do.