tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post85656642544919537..comments2023-11-06T13:07:23.645-05:00Comments on The Quintessentially Questionable Query Experiment: DL Hammons' Current QueryMatthew MacNishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-15389145896722849162012-01-23T00:53:33.865-05:002012-01-23T00:53:33.865-05:00I want to read this book right now. Signed up for ...I want to read this book right now. Signed up for the fest and will now move on to see the critique of this query.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04443736284850057306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-7504747959393606242012-01-20T15:23:05.056-05:002012-01-20T15:23:05.056-05:00Thanks for Sharing DL! Looking forward to the nex...Thanks for Sharing DL! Looking forward to the next installment.Abby Minardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963640263845561309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-16282076477323296042012-01-20T01:21:40.519-05:002012-01-20T01:21:40.519-05:00Sounded pretty good to me. I was really getting i...Sounded pretty good to me. I was really getting into the story.<br /><br /><br />Lee<br /><a href="http://afarawayview.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow"> A Faraway View</a>Arlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-74658510515827193772012-01-19T23:47:50.245-05:002012-01-19T23:47:50.245-05:00Already signed up for Origins AND I'm already ...Already signed up for Origins AND I'm already DL's follower. I'll be back tomorrow for Matt's big reveal. He always has great suggestions!Nancy Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05735642863696266005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-66756479081961331572012-01-19T22:17:51.936-05:002012-01-19T22:17:51.936-05:00signed up and raring to go. Interesting query.signed up and raring to go. Interesting query.Rusty Carlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09887821877521181811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-19061455531428502442012-01-19T21:02:45.942-05:002012-01-19T21:02:45.942-05:00The HR made me laugh (thinking back to Alexia'...The HR made me laugh (thinking back to Alexia's HR) :)<br /><br />Sounds like a great story Don!Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-90348712995960701242012-01-19T18:09:27.862-05:002012-01-19T18:09:27.862-05:00Sounds like a quite a thriller, Don! And I've ...Sounds like a quite a thriller, Don! And I've joined in your blogfest. It's right up my alley.Bish Denhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13359927719391990534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-663664509521576712012-01-19T17:04:37.266-05:002012-01-19T17:04:37.266-05:00Well, I'm definitely intrigued! I would read t...Well, I'm definitely intrigued! I would read this in a heart beat. I'm no query expert but I absolutely got hooked into the plot :)<br /><br />Fallen Knight is a great title, too.Phoenixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07477498671080132176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-32718060358146900212012-01-19T16:57:10.501-05:002012-01-19T16:57:10.501-05:00Thanks, DL, for sharing your query. Something I...Thanks, DL, for sharing your query. Something I'm sure I'll be brave enough to do one day, I think...maybe.Angela Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03324366495151363782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-20468347767091663982012-01-19T16:50:02.283-05:002012-01-19T16:50:02.283-05:00Great idea for a blogfest, guys.
Nice to meet you...Great idea for a blogfest, guys.<br /><br />Nice to meet you, Don. I'm looking forward to what Matt has to say tomorrow (and chiming in with a few thoughts of my own.)Michael G-Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07947421844294471304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-80335681601772710012012-01-19T13:56:23.312-05:002012-01-19T13:56:23.312-05:00Yay for Don's query! I will be back tomorrow. ...Yay for Don's query! I will be back tomorrow. *stretches fingers*<br /><br />And I've signed up for the origins blogfest. Shocker, I know. :)Elana Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05877856005992028912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-84793406819799229462012-01-19T13:23:57.014-05:002012-01-19T13:23:57.014-05:00Hey Don! Thanks for sharing the query. It takes a ...Hey Don! Thanks for sharing the query. It takes a lot of guts. I'm curious to see what agents think of it.A Beer for the Showerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17029139745335325356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-80493789656093895752012-01-19T12:56:22.639-05:002012-01-19T12:56:22.639-05:00Nice to meet you Don! I'm intrigued and I lik...Nice to meet you Don! I'm intrigued and I like the story idea you've presented in your query. Thanks for sharing.<br /><br />Looking forward to Matt's analysis.<br /><br />I'll check out your blogfest, too.D.G. Hudsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06213237734772028645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-90825524446457612622012-01-19T12:44:00.770-05:002012-01-19T12:44:00.770-05:00So *THAT'S* what DL stands for...huh. :D I lik...So *THAT'S* what DL stands for...huh. :D I like the idea of the Knights as a group of guys in a contemporary novel!!Christina Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01799776834213400246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-44012440681516143942012-01-19T12:31:45.511-05:002012-01-19T12:31:45.511-05:00I concur. I'm intrigued... by the story and wh...I concur. I'm intrigued... by the story and what Matt might have to say.ShaunaKelleyWriteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04654367734305011629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-51594093944515108272012-01-19T12:11:19.872-05:002012-01-19T12:11:19.872-05:00Sounds like an interesting story. Can't wait t...Sounds like an interesting story. Can't wait to see your thoughts, Matt!Nicole Zoltackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07464800543376449290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-70999706166028218002012-01-19T11:17:33.993-05:002012-01-19T11:17:33.993-05:00I've actually seen earlier drafts of this quer...I've actually seen earlier drafts of this query, so i'm excited to see what you have to say, Matt.<br />And i've already signed up for the blogfest, though i'm not sure, yet, what i want to write about. Probably fanfiction, because that shit's hilariousSarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-89225437603671523762012-01-19T10:43:28.780-05:002012-01-19T10:43:28.780-05:00Thanks for sharing your query letter with us Don. ...Thanks for sharing your query letter with us Don. Can't wait to see what Matthew has to say tomorrow.Jessica Salyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00227752359369023249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-17985261465004661022012-01-19T10:39:12.418-05:002012-01-19T10:39:12.418-05:00I really like the story. Sounds really interestin...I really like the story. Sounds really interesting. Oh, and I signed up for the blog too. :)Mina Burrowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14483363743530076604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-30444307985327620622012-01-19T10:33:09.918-05:002012-01-19T10:33:09.918-05:00Sounds like an intriguing story - looking forward ...Sounds like an intriguing story - looking forward to the critiqueTasha Seegmillerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11489911822054861132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-71098816341582864832012-01-19T10:32:20.451-05:002012-01-19T10:32:20.451-05:00Seems like a great query letter, should be interes...Seems like a great query letter, should be interesting to see suggestions.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-31657742794952116812012-01-19T10:20:37.132-05:002012-01-19T10:20:37.132-05:00Hey DL, glad to see you here. Thanks for your cour...Hey DL, glad to see you here. Thanks for your courage. I appreciate the opportunity to learn. Great premise.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-5678240828619791512012-01-19T10:14:55.647-05:002012-01-19T10:14:55.647-05:00Interesting how it ties the various elements toget...Interesting how it ties the various elements together...Bryan Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09555071335245492790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-53134919272806643052012-01-19T09:56:29.548-05:002012-01-19T09:56:29.548-05:00Interesting concept and a great title Don.
I'm...Interesting concept and a great title Don.<br />I'm looking forward to the critique tomorrow.Marta Szemikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16100791404636754754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-70514012429986455222012-01-19T09:52:03.563-05:002012-01-19T09:52:03.563-05:00DL! WOOT!
I'd read ANYTHING DL wrote. :)DL! WOOT!<br />I'd read ANYTHING DL wrote. :)kahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10789825860272178765noreply@blogger.com