tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post5119505288891556566..comments2023-11-06T13:07:23.645-05:00Comments on The Quintessentially Questionable Query Experiment: Abhinav Bhat's Current Query Revised 2Matthew MacNishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-16639686985311744032017-06-15T07:46:25.164-04:002017-06-15T07:46:25.164-04:00This is much better than the last version I read. ...This is much better than the last version I read. I would try to keep it in the present tense, like this:<br /><br />The very next day, Eldritch goes missing and the city comes under attack. The exiled heroes of a hundred subjugated races have returned, and they will see the Empire burn. And Indira is among their first targets.<br /><br />My only question is, what is Eldritch's newfound power? Should it be mentioned here?mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.com