tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post3337389839685097279..comments2023-11-06T13:07:23.645-05:00Comments on The Quintessentially Questionable Query Experiment: Todd Noker's Current Query Revised - CritiquedMatthew MacNishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-28272172273393016222017-04-26T23:07:21.021-04:002017-04-26T23:07:21.021-04:00Ack. I missed this.
I do think this is an improve...Ack. I missed this.<br /><br />I do think this is an improvement over the last version, which was too vague.<br /><br />This version is too detailed and does not endear us to the protagonist. <br /><br />Somewhere between, there is a balance that gives us the specifics we want, but also connects us to the drive and heart of the main character. <br /><br />I know. It is SO hard to find that perfect point. But you'll get there! You just have to find the perfect tipping point. I can only reiterate what Matt always says: Character, Conflict, and Stakes!Dianne K. Salernihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16459839567235304842noreply@blogger.com