tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post2881072327682320921..comments2023-11-06T13:07:23.645-05:00Comments on The Quintessentially Questionable Query Experiment: Devin Cushman's Current QueryMatthew MacNishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-77751297560949424922012-02-22T06:08:32.349-05:002012-02-22T06:08:32.349-05:00Great opening! And the premise is intriguing. I ha...Great opening! And the premise is intriguing. I have some thoughts... very minor though.Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-69540525753568764042012-02-22T03:35:44.627-05:002012-02-22T03:35:44.627-05:00I already love the work you did to your query girl...I already love the work you did to your query girl :) Don't be afraid of the red-pen, however I can't really see too much wrong with it! Oh, Matt I sent you an email, but ignore it. I've got a new one. I'll forward to you. Happy writing everyone :)Jade Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13222077919322049845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-47250607126841521822012-02-21T22:13:46.952-05:002012-02-21T22:13:46.952-05:00Ha. The edits were funnier. Thanks for being hones...Ha. The edits were funnier. Thanks for being honest and giving me a chuckle.Rusty Carlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09887821877521181811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-82396030138107309002012-02-21T21:10:34.551-05:002012-02-21T21:10:34.551-05:00Thanks for sharing Devin. AMPED sounds very promis...Thanks for sharing Devin. AMPED sounds very promising. Interesting storyline.Marta Szemikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16100791404636754754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-18866784107961552362012-02-21T13:36:46.419-05:002012-02-21T13:36:46.419-05:00Sounds interesting, like a book I'd read. Can&...Sounds interesting, like a book I'd read. Can't wait to see what Matthew says tomorrow. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)Jessica Salyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00227752359369023249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-46081814856052804552012-02-21T13:36:02.673-05:002012-02-21T13:36:02.673-05:00Thansk, Devin, for bravely stepping up and putting...Thansk, Devin, for bravely stepping up and putting your query up for review.<br /><br />And, yes, Matt, I kind of had to laugh :-)Angela Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03324366495151363782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-32776301565316835442012-02-21T13:15:40.705-05:002012-02-21T13:15:40.705-05:00Interesting concept. A little Dead Zone throwback....Interesting concept. A little Dead Zone throwback.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-49392041596305686652012-02-21T12:48:55.720-05:002012-02-21T12:48:55.720-05:00This is a pretty strong query. It will be fun to s...This is a pretty strong query. It will be fun to see what you point out.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-85390613811757019862012-02-21T11:53:17.133-05:002012-02-21T11:53:17.133-05:00If there's anything to be tweaked, Devin, Matt...If there's anything to be tweaked, Devin, Matthew will find it. He's the query wunderkind!Nancy Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05735642863696266005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-46000718349385532052012-02-21T11:35:37.645-05:002012-02-21T11:35:37.645-05:00That sounds really interesting! What a great idea!...That sounds really interesting! What a great idea! Will look forward to your input, Matt!Colene Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086195075690893194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-22268771876211485502012-02-21T11:18:22.999-05:002012-02-21T11:18:22.999-05:00Devin's story sounds very intriguing. Interest...Devin's story sounds very intriguing. Interested in seeing what you come up with, Mr. MacNish.Jay Noelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04757777693161610861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-47470202949434649892012-02-21T10:54:06.395-05:002012-02-21T10:54:06.395-05:00I'll be back tomorrow, spreading my usual star...I'll be back tomorrow, spreading my usual stardust.<br /><br />Nice to meet you, Devin!Michael G-Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07947421844294471304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-53988926445604721942012-02-21T10:33:43.394-05:002012-02-21T10:33:43.394-05:00Hello, Devin! It's nice to meet you. :)Hello, Devin! It's nice to meet you. :)Emily Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06478461123707071108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-37888948192373504312012-02-21T08:23:42.623-05:002012-02-21T08:23:42.623-05:00So interesting how many people are connected by yo...So interesting how many people are connected by your blog, Matt!<br />Love the title, Devin! <br />Enjoy your family day, Matthew!Kelly Polarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10968381456100611120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-23163767908919958192012-02-21T08:14:51.950-05:002012-02-21T08:14:51.950-05:00Ha Ha, I'm actually a woman! But I've bee...Ha Ha, I'm actually a woman! But I've been getting confusion on that my whole life. The name Devin is tricky. :) Thanks for the positive comments already!mindthagaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17489103158350388970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-9752077837219148552012-02-21T07:59:04.494-05:002012-02-21T07:59:04.494-05:00Thanks for sharing Devin. And I bet you have lots ...Thanks for sharing Devin. And I bet you have lots of interesting other book ideas from living in Egypt.Natalie Aguirrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03756087804171246660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-83626653078115718732012-02-21T07:44:25.546-05:002012-02-21T07:44:25.546-05:00He works in Egypt? Wow.He works in Egypt? Wow.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-8354041292893371102012-02-21T07:18:16.338-05:002012-02-21T07:18:16.338-05:00Already impressed, Devin.Already impressed, Devin.Karen Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01522178275164058849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-4251039968776729902012-02-21T07:14:13.076-05:002012-02-21T07:14:13.076-05:00Hi Devin - nice to meet you. Can't wait to see...Hi Devin - nice to meet you. Can't wait to see what tomorrow brings.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.com