tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post2156729050637102928..comments2023-11-06T13:07:23.645-05:00Comments on The Quintessentially Questionable Query Experiment: Jade Hart's Current QueryMatthew MacNishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-53712988702572783742012-02-07T09:32:06.244-05:002012-02-07T09:32:06.244-05:00It seems great to me. I will have to check back to...It seems great to me. I will have to check back too.Elizabeth Seckmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00045076826326574984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-8768345799377720932012-02-03T03:38:34.577-05:002012-02-03T03:38:34.577-05:00Intriguing concept! I reckon I can guess a bit abo...Intriguing concept! I reckon I can guess a bit about what you'll say!Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-49538133864901748172012-02-03T02:49:09.663-05:002012-02-03T02:49:09.663-05:00I like the sound of the book. I will be back tomor...I like the sound of the book. I will be back tomorrow to see how you improve her query.Melissa Sugarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16268333458796847721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-36602545708335660452012-02-02T22:01:48.962-05:002012-02-02T22:01:48.962-05:00I'll be back tomorrow.I'll be back tomorrow.Donna K. Weaverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15763832177263927311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-52749969907051322792012-02-02T21:10:54.232-05:002012-02-02T21:10:54.232-05:00Nice to meet you, Jade! Matt's critiques are t...Nice to meet you, Jade! Matt's critiques are the best. I'll stop by tomorrow to read and perhaps comment on your query :)Suzie F.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09560250678212373878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-90318590167944505422012-02-02T20:50:08.803-05:002012-02-02T20:50:08.803-05:00I'm interested to read tomorrow's critique...I'm interested to read tomorrow's critique!Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-29043057028820086462012-02-02T15:37:01.303-05:002012-02-02T15:37:01.303-05:00I like the sound of the story,...but do see some p...I like the sound of the story,...but do see some places for polishing as well. I'm sure your advice will be spot on, as usual, Matt. <br />Go, Jade!PK HREZOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11650153097981426833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-87555039991064401572012-02-02T14:54:59.084-05:002012-02-02T14:54:59.084-05:00Hello Everyone! The sun has risen on my side of th...Hello Everyone! The sun has risen on my side of the planet so I'm able to comment. Thanks so much for the 'hellos' *waves back* :) and be nice tomorrow ;) lol<br />Thanks for all your help Matt!Jade Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13222077919322049845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-34518509917642099512012-02-02T14:23:32.046-05:002012-02-02T14:23:32.046-05:00Thanks, Jade, for stepping up to the plate. And I...Thanks, Jade, for stepping up to the plate. And I adore your blog.Angela Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03324366495151363782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-56083616947400990472012-02-02T13:41:59.822-05:002012-02-02T13:41:59.822-05:00Wow--people's creativity amazes me!Wow--people's creativity amazes me!Christina Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01799776834213400246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-2098944175884753302012-02-02T12:41:04.964-05:002012-02-02T12:41:04.964-05:00Hi Jade, nice to meet you. Thanks for having the c...Hi Jade, nice to meet you. Thanks for having the courage to share and help us all.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-6455494163847984892012-02-02T12:38:52.866-05:002012-02-02T12:38:52.866-05:00Great concept Jade! Can't wait to read it :)Great concept Jade! Can't wait to read it :)Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-25289622810189549212012-02-02T12:13:05.610-05:002012-02-02T12:13:05.610-05:00Hello Jade. Your name sounds very exotic :)Hello Jade. Your name sounds very exotic :)Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-29095768366038825702012-02-02T11:50:22.836-05:002012-02-02T11:50:22.836-05:00Sounds interesting.
I'll wait until tomorrow t...Sounds interesting.<br />I'll wait until tomorrow to say what caught my eye in the query :)Marta Szemikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16100791404636754754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-14694939024335818592012-02-02T11:42:45.560-05:002012-02-02T11:42:45.560-05:00I know I'm supposed to comment on the query bu...I know I'm supposed to comment on the query but I couldn't help but wonder: Is your blond Labrador depressed? Why does he have his head stuck between the couch? That's the funniest thing I've seen today. LOLT.D. McFrosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12923335522993845076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-34948760938478428482012-02-02T11:41:53.286-05:002012-02-02T11:41:53.286-05:00Hey Jade! Matt has looked at my query and he is aw...Hey Jade! Matt has looked at my query and he is awesome. Can't wait to see what he says. <br /><br />Smiles from the "large critique group" LOL.Jenny S. Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00482342313938669366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-69712694057519146422012-02-02T10:57:21.141-05:002012-02-02T10:57:21.141-05:00A lot of intriguing elements here.A lot of intriguing elements here.Bryan Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09555071335245492790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-9225169540280068012012-02-02T10:25:31.807-05:002012-02-02T10:25:31.807-05:00Thanks for sharing your query with us, Jade! Looki...Thanks for sharing your query with us, Jade! Looking forward to tomorrow :)Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121018905141253640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-81601102582679542402012-02-02T10:19:08.729-05:002012-02-02T10:19:08.729-05:00Hi, Jade. I was up for query critique last week an...Hi, Jade. I was up for query critique last week and learned so much from Matthew and everyone. Looking forward to tomorrow.Barbara Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06547166495514562286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-49645143885360711762012-02-02T10:17:22.807-05:002012-02-02T10:17:22.807-05:00We will break the rules, just this once, for you, ...We will break the rules, just this once, for you, Kristen.Matthew MacNishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-5767320797268544972012-02-02T10:10:05.099-05:002012-02-02T10:10:05.099-05:00Can I cheat? I'm not going to be around tomorr...Can I cheat? I'm not going to be around tomorrow. So sorry but I have to cheat and say a couple things today.<br /><br />I LOVE "she may not be Loka at all." Somehow that takes my breath away.<br /><br />In the first paragraph, I was a little confused about Satya and what it is or who it is.<br /><br />That's it--I wouldn't have bothered but I thought it was so well written and interesting, so welcome, Jade Hart (awesome name!) and good luck with your query.Kristen Wixtedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06270464973842125576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-42509935018707100022012-02-02T10:08:18.269-05:002012-02-02T10:08:18.269-05:00Won't say anything in regards to feedback, but...Won't say anything in regards to feedback, but I will say that I love seeing these query letters, and that I'm off to Middle Earth to go say hi to Jade personally.A Beer for the Showerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17029139745335325356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-91257815400865555382012-02-02T09:37:19.368-05:002012-02-02T09:37:19.368-05:00Nice to meet you, Jade. I'm looking forward to...Nice to meet you, Jade. I'm looking forward to Matt's comments tomorrow, and will have some suggestions of my own.Michael G-Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07947421844294471304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-54273005342188317082012-02-02T09:36:21.393-05:002012-02-02T09:36:21.393-05:00How exciting! I'm new to this blog, but I have...How exciting! I'm new to this blog, but I have had the pleasure of getting to read this story from its beginnning. I'm looking forward to reading the comments tomorrow. I know Jade loves helpful feedback. Hhmm, my wip is almost done. This makes me want to get a query together for some good ol' red ink :) (oh and, hi fellow Georgian :) I'm in Cartersville- tucked between a lake and a mountain.Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00368485571268832781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-85753952835547211782012-02-02T09:29:57.197-05:002012-02-02T09:29:57.197-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00368485571268832781noreply@blogger.com