tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post1905178655291326079..comments2023-11-06T13:07:23.645-05:00Comments on The Quintessentially Questionable Query Experiment: Stella Telleria's Current QueryMatthew MacNishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-35669362029165137142012-05-04T20:56:01.708-04:002012-05-04T20:56:01.708-04:00I think this is a great blog to help others with w...I think this is a great blog to help others with writing queries. Thanks, Matt!!Traci Kenworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07336373871521363649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-21269569176841605732012-05-03T22:04:55.809-04:002012-05-03T22:04:55.809-04:00Yes, I've known Stella for a while now. *Waves...Yes, I've known Stella for a while now. *Waves*<br /><br />Not sure what the protocol is here, but I have to say I love the first two paras. I think the next two got weighed down with too much detail, but it looks like Matt will be giving a detailed critique, so shutting up now :)Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-53703144373106670762012-05-03T20:18:29.160-04:002012-05-03T20:18:29.160-04:00Dueling POV means there are two characters in whic...Dueling POV means there are two characters in which the POV goes back and forth between (first person). Is it unclear or is there a better way to state this?<br /><br />Thank you everybody!!Stella Telleriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11990643131467271476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-23956228416373106872012-05-03T20:07:15.779-04:002012-05-03T20:07:15.779-04:00Just headed over and followed her blog. I can'...Just headed over and followed her blog. I can't wait to read tomorrow's post!Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-45684630275386646232012-05-03T11:57:26.393-04:002012-05-03T11:57:26.393-04:00What does dueling point-of-view mean? I visited he...What does dueling point-of-view mean? I visited her blog and clicked follow! Can't wait to see your analysis.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-8168495544471014012012-05-03T11:51:25.550-04:002012-05-03T11:51:25.550-04:00Stella, you got my attention with the first paragr...Stella, you got my attention with the first paragraph. Mad left hook indeed!Zan Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13403563510118660546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-4598586549278758182012-05-03T10:54:44.750-04:002012-05-03T10:54:44.750-04:00Hi there! Wow, I think you're well on your way...Hi there! Wow, I think you're well on your way. Love this line: "That’s one mad left-hook."Christina Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01799776834213400246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-81579312491155436092012-05-03T10:25:25.780-04:002012-05-03T10:25:25.780-04:00A totally unique story! I'm excited to see wh...A totally unique story! I'm excited to see what Matthew has to say. I'll be back.Nancy Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05735642863696266005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-66455659652222920392012-05-03T09:56:23.433-04:002012-05-03T09:56:23.433-04:00I love the premise. It's a neat take on parall...I love the premise. It's a neat take on parallel worlds/utopia. Hoping Mia kicks some major a$$!<br /><br />I'll be interested, as always, to see what you come up with, Matthew.Jay Noelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04757777693161610861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-85419754582245495302012-05-03T09:11:55.396-04:002012-05-03T09:11:55.396-04:00Hi Stella, WOW - certainly is different. Thanks fo...Hi Stella, WOW - certainly is different. Thanks for the opportunity to look into this further (or should that be farther) whichever.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-15976485255499171762012-05-03T08:32:39.950-04:002012-05-03T08:32:39.950-04:00Hi, Stella! Nice to meet you!
Wow -- what a query!...Hi, Stella! Nice to meet you!<br />Wow -- what a query! I love the first half, have some suggestions for the second half. But I'm supposed to hold them till tomorrow,so I'll shut up now. :DDianne K. Salernihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16459839567235304842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5345890055658252124.post-10339265055505435682012-05-03T07:20:07.807-04:002012-05-03T07:20:07.807-04:00Hello, Stella!! I love this query. I can't wai...Hello, Stella!! I love this query. I can't wait to see what Matt has to say. :)Emily Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06478461123707071108noreply@blogger.com